@starmanjones - Dealt with ants Loki has not. Boots mean nothing to fire ants in undies. D’:
@Lakakalo - that’ll teach you to be mindful of where you put your privates don’t feel bad, I looked down once pleasant sittin spot , one, two three, wait a minute these are red ants oh no, two at a time!…brushing some three or four that didn’t fall as I lept up… I looked down and noticed a minor detail of a lil bump in the middle of the nice dirt patch… I had sat literaly atop a fireant hill….maybe they were wondering who came to dinner but I was fortunate I have yet to be bee stung or fireant bit, not sure about the spiders and a mean duck and snake anve put the chomp on me- I’ve evenbeen singled out for the elephant hose down! but I’ve managed no fire ant or bee stings
Hahahahah very good!
@starmanjones - Depending on the season, they seek refuge in any place they find.
Had to stop using towels. Had to stop trusting neatly folded cloths.
-_-
@SaintBlue1131 - Thanks. I’m sorry to say the inspiration for this came from real life. D’:
@Lakakalo - chaos is hiding – within neat order, disception! – biting lies are found.
A picture speaks a thousand words and in this case, a single story. Fire Ants… NO THANK YOU!!
Neat stuff on the last two comments between you and @starmanjones…
@MzSilver - You’d be amazed what can result from attempting to writing smart-ass haiku.
@Lakakalo - I’m going to have to be picky about form which is not particularly require but amuses me as believe it or not I write them – 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables with the first line a subject, the second line an action, and the last line some muddle up or make up a meaning I’ve given up trying to rhyme the last syllable/s of the first line and last line more often than not anymore as no one cares and it’s not required for the american styling of a haiku. but I still conceive MY notions with this in mind now
soothing improoving – loomingsalvation’s grooming – dooming the brooding.
@MzSilver - @xxxxxxxxx not @xxxxxxxxx….. or the hashtag doesn’t work alway try to keep it as a seperate word I’ll see it not just in passing or the people you will but thanks, he’s my haiku doppleganger pal! glad he’s back
@starmanjones - Ahhh… I didn’t even think about that creating a problem and even I know better. DRAT!!… Glad you caught the comment. I will remember that in the future since I have a tendency to use the additional dots at the end of my words…
@Lakakalo - Oh, I do have a good idea. I’ve seen some really neat ones by both you and Mr. Jones… Funny, he and I have the same last name. Perhaps a long lost relative? Interesting thought…
Better? Methinks I shall return to non-rhyming Poetry for now.
@MzSilver - I have a tradition, of sorts, with @starmanjones One that involves communicating through Haiku as much as possible. Somewhere between our replies & re-replies through Xanga is a book of smart-ass Haikus, waiting to be published.
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yes there are times.
@starmanjones -
Dealt with ants Loki
has not. Boots mean nothing to
fire ants in undies. D’:
@Lakakalo - that’ll teach you to be mindful of where you put your privates
don’t feel bad, I looked down once pleasant sittin spot , one, two three, wait a minute these are red ants oh no, two at a time!…brushing some three or four that didn’t fall as I lept up… I looked down and noticed a minor detail of a lil bump in the middle of the nice dirt patch… I had sat literaly atop a fireant hill….maybe they were wondering who came to dinner but I was fortunate I have yet to be bee stung or fireant bit, not sure about the spiders and a mean duck and snake anve put the chomp on me- I’ve evenbeen singled out for the elephant hose down! but I’ve managed no fire ant or bee stings
Hahahahah very good!
@starmanjones -
Depending on the
season, they seek refuge in
any place they find.
Had to stop using
towels. Had to stop trusting
neatly folded cloths.
-_-
@SaintBlue1131 - Thanks. I’m sorry to say the inspiration for this came from real life. D’:
@Lakakalo - chaos is hiding – within neat order, disception! – biting lies are found.
@starmanjones -
Uniting citing
slighting… inciting biting,
igniting fighting.
(WHEW.)
A picture speaks a thousand words and in this case, a single story. Fire Ants… NO THANK YOU!!
Neat stuff on the last two comments between you and @starmanjones…
@MzSilver - You’d be amazed what can result from attempting to writing smart-ass haiku.
@Lakakalo - I’m going to have to be picky about form which is not particularly require but amuses me as believe it or not I write them – 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables with the first line a subject, the second line an action, and the last line some muddle up or make up a meaning
I’ve given up trying to rhyme the last syllable/s of the first line and last line more often than not anymore as no one cares and it’s not required for the american styling of a haiku. but I still conceive MY notions with this in mind
now
soothing improoving – loomingsalvation’s grooming – dooming the brooding.
@MzSilver - @xxxxxxxxx not @xxxxxxxxx….. or the hashtag doesn’t work
alway try to keep it as a seperate word
I’ll see it not just in passing or the people you will
but thanks, he’s my haiku doppleganger pal!
glad he’s back
@starmanjones - Ahhh… I didn’t even think about that creating a problem and even I know better. DRAT!!
… Glad you caught the comment. I will remember that in the future since I have a tendency to use the additional dots at the end of my words…
@Lakakalo - Oh, I do have a good idea. I’ve seen some really neat ones by both you and Mr. Jones… Funny, he and I have the same last name. Perhaps a long lost relative? Interesting thought…
@starmanjones -
Inciting biting.
Uniting citing slighting…
Igniting fighting.
Better? Methinks I
shall return to non-rhyming
Poetry for now.
@MzSilver - I have a tradition, of sorts, with @starmanjones One that involves communicating through Haiku as much as possible. Somewhere between our replies & re-replies through Xanga is a book of smart-ass Haikus, waiting to be published.
@Lakakalo - :P
-meter, oh meter-beat blurs stirringup our time-rhyming is no CRIM!E!
@starmanjones -
Oh rhyming ain’t no
crime. Just don’t got the time. I’m
…running low on chyme…?
0_O
@Lakakalo -
to smurfy pattern -Go eat food! Lakakalo- kitchen or tavern.
@starmanjones -
At two forty five?
Nothing is open. And I
have laundry to do.
-_-
@Lakakalo -
laundry soap with gas- this makes napalmnot nummies, perhaps a sandwich?
@starmanjones -
Sigh. No sandwich. Just
Coffee and Soy Balls. ‘Scuse me
while I masticate.
@Lakakalo - tea lakakalo – boba bubbles bouncing’ bout – tea lakakalo
@starmanjones -
Alliteration
- Amusingly Appealing -
Alliteration
^_^
ha. there you are. (i’m listening to music from Inception and looking at this Loki. Dramatic
@Bels_Kaylar - Hey, thanks for the rec. I find the song “S.I.M.P” (http://youtu.be/OID7gA8fcaw) actually goes pretty well with this.
@Lakakalo - uh, yes, that works
mine was more…old school
Ugh! Ugh! *speechless*